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[Groangasm]

retarded. haha...I clicked on "greatest" in NG and this is what I got. congratulations.

[Launch]

Not much here whatsoever. Make a melody, some beat patterns, chords, whatever--just don't waste your time doing this...I don't even know what it is. Just chase these short tracks further so they're worth listening to.

[Starry-Eyed and Dreaming]

Nice beat and pluck in the intro. I think you could check the volume on a lot of your sounds. The pad volume that fades in is pretty overwhelming. I saw a little build, but not too much real noticeable climax, because you kinda just repeated the chorus. Good work over all. : )

[Cosminox]

Feel free to call this genre "the bestest techno genre of awesomeness"
Because all it is is you making what sounds awesome, so...
haha, I like your music.

ErikMcClure responds:

yay

[Solar Noise (Original Mix)]

OH NO! you are being sucked into the commercial world of profit and not-so-free music!! :S
Your songs are the best! keep it up!

[~BH~ Through The Snowfall]

There is no way you did all this in Sytrus!! Do you do youtube tutorials with sytrus?? I would subscribe if you did. XD I use Sytrus, but it's hard to work with for a noob like me. Nice work! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

ErikMcClure responds:

No but I did make these: http://fav.me/d192m6y

[Wander of Thought - F-777]

I like because it feels so much longer than it actually is. So engaging. :)

[Tecknozle 2 Pianolia WIP]

I have to agree that the automation tempo change just does not belong in this song at all. Coincidentally, I just started playing around with it myself. But, the way yours starts fast and then gets slow and then gets fast again is just pointless. If you want to try starting slow then increasing it gradually while simultaneously bringing the song to a crescendo, you might pull it off, but the way you've done it seemed very unappealing.
I think the first kick you used is too loud and the second one a little too quiet. So, find a good in-between and use it throughout the entire song. I like the melody and the sounds, the only thing you need to work on is the mechanics of your song.
Keep working at it! : D Don't feel too discouraged.

armandragon responds:

oh ok i will do my best to fix problemes thanks for ur review :) . i will try

[Alluring Darkness]

I like the strangeness of it all. Epic, yet high pitched leads that make it really suspenseful. Cool. :D

Step responds:

Yeah this one's a strange one haha. Not really in my best genre; I'm better at making orchestral stuff like Sanctuary, but still, I love to delve into other genres sometimes.

Thanks for leaving a comment!

[Concerning Hobbits Piano]

I personally didn't find the short pauses that appealing. I'm impressed with your patience in placing all the notes. One thing I'd check is the voicing of the notes. You basically need to lower the velocity of the less important notes.
That's all. Nice work. :)