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What a lovely piece! The instrument levels, such as the trombone volume when it first entered, could be a little more balanced. I get the idea this wasn't really "mixed" though.
Like I said, the music in this is just nice! Did you write this?? If so, I have to say 5 stars on the composition! The trombonist was a little outta tune a couple times, but that gives it that raw feeling, and you can't help that a whole lot.
Recording quality aside this is an excellent performance!

rluebbert responds:

Thanks! This is one of my original compositions. I recorded this at a live performance on my field recorder, so there were probably quite a few nerves involved.

Took a little while to get interesting. bit of a glitch at 0:34?
a little too disorganized at 50.
Not a bad drop though. I think there should be an overall increase in connectedness in this song, but it seems you were going for a chaotic theme, perhaps...
liked the 2:00 part especially
Nice one!

FI5H responds:

Ya this tune got to the point where the little things that you pointed out i eventually just stopped caring about, I dig the feedback though!

Personally I like it the way it is...
But hey, if you want to add some bass, you could always do the signature Blackmill bass. That would probably fit nicely.
I love the sound, progression, and beat to this though.
Pretty epic

Semaphore responds:

It was an idea and unfortunately not much more than that.

I don't know...I was nodding my head for sure to this beat. for what it was, it was very calming and enjoyable. I think you could have added a melody though. You have a solid foundation to what could be a full blown song. Seriously, just reopen this thing, add a piano track, and see what you can do!
Have fun with it!
It's easy to be content when you've brought a work this far, but I encourage you to look at it as a task to keep the attention of your audience, and make sure you leave no stone unturned, and no measure too empty.
Nice!

NGKFlower responds:

Thanks! I'll keep that in mind. I felt like it was missing something

Your drums are super groovy man! I really love the precision and balance in that area. Your guitar melody is pretty sweet too, though not too spectacular.

ChandlerThompson responds:

I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the review pal.

The drums and rhythm are cool, I'll give you that. But uh, everything else is just kind of random. I'll have to see if you have any more complete songs, because this definitely had a lot of cool bits and pieces in it.

ChandlerThompson responds:

I can see what you're saying, I'll definitely work on the cohesion for my next song!

The rap was pretty catchy, though personally not a fan. I would still be impressed if that was you rapping though xD The bassy synth you used throughout the entire song got a little old after a while. Overall, it sounded well mastered, though a little repetitive, and I think the rap was decent, even though I personally don't enjoy it as much
Nice work!

Shabadaman responds:

Thanks a lot man, it's really great to hear your feedback!

Man, it sounds like a start! The chord progression is great, but the guitar totally over-powers her voice. I think this is mostly a reflection on your recording equipment, though. If there is anything you can do to bring out her voice and make it less distorted and muffled, do it. Otherwise, get a new mic. :P
If you get the chance to work on this more, maybe make a piano intro and have the guitar come in later as a crescendo.
I would love to hear you improve and work with this style more! :D

Shabadaman responds:

We recorded it with an iPhone and I took the audio from there! Aha I'll try and work on getting the guitar to be quieter, maybe we'll record it again! We're going to be posting a remix very soon! :D

You have been busy while you were gone I can see--this is absolute creativity! I agree with a lot of what D-Chain said, but I'm not sure I would constrict yourself so much--I mean, this is pretty sick, even if it isn't conventional. I love it! Can't wait to hear more! :DD

Shabadaman responds:

Thanks dude! Be sure to see more stuff coming out soon!

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